~ Happy reading ~
I'm impressed. Both MCs seem to be so hurt, abused (physical or mental or both) and alone, but you could see a spark of a beginning connection. And I (as in the reader) want to know more, anything, everything. About each MCs past, about their personalities, about their feelings. I think that's how a drug addict must feel because I'm barely able to think of something else than this story at the moment. (Please note, I meant no offence because I definitely don't know how an addict really feels).